Monday, April 12, 2010

MAGIC OF PALACE 3rd PART {Brindanz war [gods war]}

Hi, here is your story MAGIC OF PALACE 3 part
 The answers for 2nd part is liya hugged that statue because it was her husband and you can get  the answer for my 2ns question from this story

                                                  After Liya went to upstairs, She heard some voice, so she suddenly closed the door and went down.and she had a long breath. After some mins, the queen came and informed to Liya that there is a important poojas at 5:00 pm so Liya should not wander around the palace and she should be in her room only. she told ok politely and told herself that "this is the day I am waiting for This would be the last day for Grecse".
                                                  At sharply 3:00 she went to upstairs again but she opened a library which is a restricted area before she stepped into the room she ate something and she became invisible she checked every rack and finally she found a book called "BRINDANZ WAR {gods order}".This is what I want and she read that book and told herself that. This book only contains about the war. she suddenly heard someone's footsteps so she remained as statue. It was Greece who entered into the room, when he entered he smiled and went to another direction, he took a key and opened a door. Liya also watched that . He took a book from that room. Liya whispered herself that "that is the book which I want!". Then Greece went out.
                                                    The poojas began. Liya cried aloud with disappointment and she became angry she split out a thing which she eaten when she went into the room and she took a sword to kill Greece.she went near Greece and told "you, The destroyer of the world I am going to kill you". Greece's shoulders ran to her to save their king. In that second Greece shouted "stop it" . It became so silence,Greece began to speak "Listen Liya, You can kill me, But before that you should know one thing to save your husband. In the past I am and your husband Brindanz are close friends, one day I decided to give my half a kingdom to my close friend. But my enemies who became jealous of our friendship and wealth. On those days we were  strong  in this country, so some of  our enemies talked to my close friends to separate him from me.    Their speech gave him some wrong thoughts of me. so he told that he decided to take war against me. Do you know one thing Liya we actually have powers to talk to god and the god will help us directly.when we took war Brindanz done some cheating from god side so our gods became angry at him because he don't know what is the meaning of friendship and began to do cheating. so when the war began. the gods changed him and  his army into statue and ordered us to take care of those statues. But I want my friend back so I asked to god that "oh my lord, I can't live without my friend,so what I mean to say is, can I exchange our fate?" and he replayed as to do poojas for 2 years and he could exchange.  so that only I am doing all these poojas and the god also ordered as not to spell those magical words which U are searching for.
                                                Liya became so surprised on hearing these news she couldn't believe it too. so she asked " how could I believe you? a light appeared then everybody in that hall sat down in respect. that light told that " Liya I am the god, I am the one who punished your husband" Liya cried "oh god! please save my husband" god replied that " Liya, its out of my hand, It is in your husband's thoughts to make  himself   free".
                                               Greece began to speak" my dear friend, I know that you are hearing our voice, just listen to me my friend. we all are here with lot of love in our heart for you. But you only not understanding us ". On hearing these words Brindanz statue began to crack because he is crying inside his heart because of his mistake. Then after 2 mins Brindanz came alive. He ran and hugged his friend Greece and cried " I am sorry my friend" Then Greece had some tears in his eyes. And all of them in that palace became very happy because the 2 friends was together now.
                                                
                                                   Hai! how is my story? I wrote this story now itself  because It was my first comment for my last pose. hi Jey brother are you happy now? :)
                                                  Thankyou for saravenesh machan and Venkata Vishwanath Vanjari  brother for the response.

Wednesday, April 7, 2010

MY WRITINGS

Hai readers,
        I am proud that many of them are interested to read my stories. My first story is a love story, it was written when I was studying 3rd standard but I am sorry I don't remember that story now. Then I wrote TITANIC story   ,it was written when I was studying 4th std, then my brother seen that and he found that I was interested in writing stories then he created a blog for me. Before creating the blog I used to chat with my brother in balapa's computer at the same time one day he created a blog for me.OUR CONVERSATION GONE LIKE THIS TO GIVE A NAME TO MY BLOG
 Manicka: ethavathu name kudu
(Give any name)
MY BROTHER: Ok. I will give the name as "Manicka is a stupid girl"
Manicka: (shouting) Youuuuuuuuuu
MY BROTHER: Tell me something nice
Manicka: Manicka is a good girlnu potuka.{write as manicka is a good girl}
MY BROTHER: Is the word "good" spelled as "B-A-D"?
Manicka: Youuuuu. that is bad. Good is spelled as "G-O-O-D".
MY BROTHER: No no. You are wrong. "G-O-O-D" is bad.
Manicka: Youu. Put Manicka is a GOOD girl

THUS NOW MY BLOG IS NAMED AS. http://manicka-goodgirl.blogspot.com

TITANIC STORY
               It is the first story which I  wrote in pen, but when I wrote it, I first written ice rock instead of iceberg, then my brother changed it. Everybody told that the climax was good, it gave me a happiest smile that I never had before.

MAGIC OF PALACE
             It is my first story which I wrote with my own creation from the beginning but I didn't  finish it yet. But I decided to finish it within 5 months.

MY FAMILY?
             I didn't paste this story in my blog but I wrote it in my dairy and I finished that story too. This story is about a man who solves a mystery in his home but that mystery gives him a great surprise at last.

MURDER
             I didn't paste this story too. This is a story about the continuous murder in a home everybody  dies in that family, police will try to find it and they  arrested a person after few days. 7 friends comes to live in that home but again the murder continues.

ANGELLEENA
              This story is about a girl named Lakshmi who is having strange story in her dream but it is true.she don't like to tell to anybody except her best friend Arnmatha because she thinks that no one will believe her.

ME
         This story is specially made for students. In this story there are 4 students who is having different  characters. They are enemies who becomes friends gradually and solves their problems.

WHO AM I ?
          This story is about a girl who is feeling some disturbance when she enters into her new school. she makes good friend but she don't want to share her problem with her friends because she thinks that if she tells about her disturbance her friends will think that she is a bad girl because she tells lies always.

                                 THESE ARE MY STORIES, MY DEAR READERS. FROM THESE STORIES I PASTED 2 STORIES IN MY BLOG. BUT I DIDN'T PASTE REMAINING 5 STORIES. I DON'T KNOW WHICH STORY I SHOULD WRITE FIRST SO, I DECIDED TO FOLLOW YOUR CHOICE.
NOW READERS YOUR DUTY IS READ CAREFULLY ABOUT ALL THESE STORIES. THEN TELL ME YOUR CHOICE THROUGH COMMEND.
                                                       thank you give me the right choice ...... :D